Thursday, February 2, 2012

How us this for a thesis statement(Serial killers)?

i'm writing a term paper on how serial killers seem to blend in as ordinary people when there are clearly signs that somethings wrong with them this is my thesis:



Its mind boggling how serial killers seem to sort of camouflage into the beautiful atmosphere of society without being spotted as such a menace.it makes me question my surroundings to know that I can walk past a person an they look so normal to be blinded or be in denial that the cutest or cleanest guy on the trains fave dessert could be the limbs of a human being or that a younger males fave past time could be soliciting prostitutes online and acting out the roles of a batter with an ax to there head..how can one be so blind..as weird as it seems all to often this seems to be the case..How us this for a thesis statement(Serial killers)?
It's a good intro but the thesis should be one stand-alone sentence that summarizes your entire paper. For example, Although serial killers may seem nonexistent, they walk among us every day.

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