My favorite class this semester is Human Biology. I went into the semester dreading the online class and feared I would struggle through it. The processes of the human body are enough to boggle the mind; from its genetic make-up to its effects on the biosphere, the complexity of human life is amazing. Despite my fears prior to the start of the semester, I really enjoy the subject matter, and my interest has caused me to do well in the class. Human Biology has been a lot of work, but I find it all very rewarding.Is this paragraph grammatically correct?
I like your paragraph. It is insightful and tells how you felt about your Human Biology course. All in one paragraph you expressed yourself very nicely.
Congratulations and good luck with this.
Yep.Is this paragraph grammatically correct?
Very nice!
The paragraph is just fine. Everyone has their own style and would word it their own way. Personally, I would dispense with the comma after "subject matter;" but that's just me.Is this paragraph grammatically correct?
That is an excellent paragraph. No grammatical errors.
However, I would perhaps reword the second-last sentence.
'...and my interest has resulted in my doing well in the class.'
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hi ! I was wondering about your paragraph...You used past form of the verbs which means that the actions were past..
I tried to simplify it using past forms and I do hope that this can help you a bit..
My favorite class this semester was Human Biology. I started the semester dreading on-line classes and fearing that I would struggle through it. The processes of the human body were enough to boggle the mind; from its genetic make-up to its effects on the biosphere. Human life鈥檚 complexity was amazing. Despite my fears, I really enjoyed the subject matter and caused me to do well in class. Human Biology had been a lot of work but was very rewarding.
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